My favorite part of your photo is the boy leaping in the air. I wish the entire photo had a bit more color or saturation, as the grass and landscape appear somewhat muted.
Good celebration, the image communicates it without a caption. Your difficulty is with the elements being so far apart that you have had to include a lot of other stuff that detracts from the image. Ther action though is terrific
Very strangely structured image. Your title makes me think that the kid jumping is whaere I should be looking, but he's placed too near the edge of frame to be the real subject. The other two kids have faces turned away and so neither of them can provide the main subject for me. So that leaves the ball, but that tends to get lost against the complex background.
Nope my eye still keeps jumping around all those places it just won't rest.
Try to keep an image simple, provide one place for the eye to rest on. In this case simply the kid jumping in close-up would have been my choice of image.
Hope that means something, and you don't see it as simply dissing your image.
This image could use a bump in contrast. There are too many things that are happeningin the image that my eye can't seem to foucs on the subject. It is the boy wearing number 5 isn't it?
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