I'm not quite sure what the object in the front is...a frame? a speaker? While it conveys sadness it could use some tweaking. I wonder about a different light source that would cast stronger shadows on the wall or maybe changing this to a black and white photo instead of the green/gray/blue?
Suffers from some technical problems. The flowers seem slightly out of focus (worst on the left). The choice of B&W doesn't add too much because so much detail is lost in the flowers. I also don't understand the significance of the frame. Finally, the picture is crooked. You did get the concept of personification though. 5
Not really sure what I'm seeing here. The contents of the frame are really dark and I feel that is a problem. Also, the dead flowers are taking all my attention and I don't feel that it is good for something that is not in focus to take up most of my attention. JMO.