Love the expression on her face and the glow of the candle but I am not comfortable with the message I get from this one. Nothing personal and I didn't score you according to that. Technically, its pretty good.
In addition to the main subject looking human, I feel that the lighting is flat. For me, I'm trying to understand the point of the image. The really great photos are those that work in the challenge but also stand on their own as wonderful photos without a challenge to belong to.