I absolutely LOVE this shot. It really stood out to me the first time I visited your profile and I think it is underrated. Beautiful clean colors, textures. and skin tones. Interesting and pleasing crop and composition. A couple small things my eyes notice - you might have considered a cleaner background for each side of your head and there is a bit of a halo on the inside of your border. The halo is possibly an artifact of sharpening or noise reduction after putting on the border. Congratulations on a beautiful shot!
love it!, the angle is great and the lips are perfect. The scarf looks a little orange but it may be my monitor. May have been better on a black background.
the inclusion of so much hat seems arbitrary, and the shadow in the upper right pulls the eye strongly. i'm thinking a 3/4 angle on this girl would be nice to see.