Nice shot! The lighting is great, I'm OK with the crop (maybe just a little tight), and I like the thin border. It lacks the viceral "WOW" that makes a 10, but is a very nice photo all the same. Well done.
Good composition. Did you consider black and white here? This is more than a snapshot, but the colors are kind of flat and overall it lacks tons of visual appeal. I can see you worked hard with the set-up -- good luck in the challenge.
This reminds me of one of my challenge entries from several months ago (Title: Broken). Although I was very happy with it, it didn't score very well. Hopefully yours will do better than mine did :)
more DOF would have made this much stronger IMO, a little more light on the cream pitcher too - this is almost exactly what I was thinking for my entry, so it's fun to see it (I didn't enter)