Since you took this with the aid of a flash and with all that light in the background, you probably had no choice but to risk the chance of an overexposure. If you could have moderated your flash just a touch, it would have been (imo) techically a better image.
Then, It might have been a good idea to pose this model so that the bright white/blue screen to the left does not show. It does tend to take interest away from your subject.
All in all, you probably had fun getting this image and I wish you success in your future DPChallenges.
how many people will visit her web site cause of this and many other pictures?? lol nice and colorful though i dont like that i cant really see her eyes. whats that between her legs??? nudity?? lol...
Eeeek! I often look at images and think "I wonder if this wouldn't look better from a lower angle?" This is not one of those times. I'm thinking maybe a higher angle! That is just hilarious. One of the things I'm missing by not living in a big city. I'm giving you points for creativity and making me snicker before noon. Technically, it is a bit overwhelming to me. The background is so busy that your subject gets a little lost. Really fun though!