I'm not sure why you cut out so much of the coffee. I assume you were trying to be "spontaneous," but I feel you've ended up being unsuccessfully "artsy."
Tough shot. I really like the composition and effect of this but the depth of field is very very difficult to achieve unless you have a full commercial setup and very very small apertures at your disposal. Overall, I find the image appealing but technically is wanting
Like the shot not a big fan of the large border. Regardless I love the angle and the offset coffee cup with the cream and sugar in the background. Really well done.