The perspective hits the challenge head on, but including the sky in the frame made for a difficult exposure -- the sky is just too bright. Using a flash would have helped even out the tones to the point you may not have had to do so much post processing.
As stated in the comments, there is no sense of interaction between the flower and the person, making the person a bit of a distraction rather than a composition element. Having the person reaching for the flower, or some other interaction, would have helped with this.
Looking thru your entries I see that you have a lot of good ideas and are learning to express them well. Keep up the good work.
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