Critique Club Review,
Good message from the photo, it does fit well with the title and tell the story. I'm notm sure if the backlighting was on, on the PDA, but it could have helped to make the solitate game stand out more. As it is, the game is a bit dark and tends to fade into the table surface. It is also overwhelmed by the brightnes of the PDA case and the nearby glass. The eye wants to travel up the glass, and then is distracted by the out of focus rim, and the chalk line that tries to pull in tow directions from the center. Otherwise the depth of field is good, and exposure is a bit contrasty running the wood dark and almost washing out the case of the PDA. Excellent idea for the phot. Got a big grin from me. |