Good idea -- a nice relaxing drink of Coca-Cola by candlelight.
Unfortunately the subject (the drink) is far too dark. Not that there isn't enough light -- there is -- but the light sources (the candles) are both above the liquid line. The places the the entire beveragea in complete darkness. To combat this, either place the candles further away from the glass (which will drastically reduce the light on the subject) or light the subject discretely from some other source.
I like the choice of candles -- they add to the rustic relaxation. Brings to mind a night of sitting around a fire in a cabin or a lodge.
David
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