Greetings from the Critique Club Garret.
I like the simplicity and the geometry of this photo, but I think it might be a little too simple. A straight up building, solid black sky, plain block letters… There is nothing that really jumps out and says wow. Maybe try it right after sunset with some interesting clouds? Or try a more interesting/unusual angle?
I do like the way the lighted parts frame the building, but did you know if dropped the aperture down to about 4 you’d get some starburst from them and that might give the photo a little wow factor? |
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