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I think the composition of this is a tad busy. The ceramic sculpture in the lower part is too distracting and doesn't add to the shot at all. What if you cropped to just below the dove on the ledge? I still think it would work and you could even zoom in more on the bird. AS it is, there is so much going on, that there isn't a place for the eye to rest. I don't really see the connection between friendship and a dove with some garden statuary but that's not the point. The clarity and focus is there. The lighting is good. Just delete some of it, or shoot in an area that has more solid surface, and I think you have a winner. |