Greetings from the Critique Club
What a lovely image. Great colors, good composition, excellent depth of field. I don't have any suggestions to make to 'improve' this photograph.
While I see you received some complimentary comments on your title, I rather think the title is what brought your score down a bit. Maybe something like "wish you were here" would have been more appealing to the average voter.
I can only wish you continued success in your participation in DPC and look forward to seeing more of your work. |