Not a bad concept -- lots of candles and the party plate. But the use of a twinkie doesn't seem to add anything to the shot. Also I'm not sure all the dripping wax really helps. If you were trying to use the wax to communicate something specific I don't really get it.
I like that the candles have started melting down and the flames are high. I think I'd remove the plastic fork in the foreground, as it's blurred and doesn't add anything to the shot. I'd like to see more negative space in front of the plate. The DOF is good and the idea is fun.