Hello from the Critique Club.
I think you chose a good concept for the greeting card challenge, but with a few adjustments this could be an even better photo.
For me, I think perhaps having the main focal point just a bit more off centered or even taken at a slightly different angle would help. A deeper angle would have put the sun higher, perhaps right behind Jesus' head and maybe given Him a halo type effect.
It seems just a bit flat, but with a bit more contrast and saturation - or even turning this into a black and white image it could really work.
This is an appealing sympathy image and again, a good concept. A few tweaks or different angle would greatly enhance the overall effect.
Keep up the good work. |