I would have liked it better if a) the elbow was in a more realistic position b) people were not looking at the camera c) it was shot in black and white.
I find the photo too cluttered, though I think its what you were trying to achieve. The focus on the girl in the back looks off -- I think she would have looked better with more or less focus than where she is now.
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