Well, what can I write? There are so much reflex, with a lot of hot spots in a very deficient light. Due to the hard subject as all reflexive surfaces are, the light must be carefully used.
the table top is ugly. I'd like the photo much more if the background was black or something. I'm sorry. I dislike major clashes of patten and color. Don't like the grayness--colors are dull and faded. And why is there a lemon peel on the saucer? How does LEMON go with COFFEE?
For me, the background is a bit busy and distracts from the main subject of your photo. I like having the cup and saucer off center and the added bit of peel is a nice touch. With just a bit sharper focus and a less busier background, I would have scored it higher. Good effort.