when I first looked at this, I didn't know what I was seeing, the black in the foreground was confusing to me. I think there is too much black, and to much white. If it were mine I'd go back 70% on all applied effects. Hope that's helpful.
I've been creating effects for video and film for 15 years, and find that most effects are too visible. The artist has worked hard on the effect and wants you to appreciate their work. However, it's the 8% effect, the 10%, effect, and the 5% effect stacked on top of each other that really creates the illusion of reality.
Now if you're creating art - you've done it! It's a very interesting abstract that made me stop and think. |