7 - Nice. Criticism; difficult I know given the color of the "point(s) of interest", but just a touch brighter. Like that water drop on the right duck, maybe even a closer crop and that/the beak as the "poi", who knows. Tail either softer or in focus maybe, not sure. Technically, while no 'expert', seems to me you have used at least three rules here, top third, right third and top right intersection, so well done. edit:typos
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