Challenge:Sound (Classic Editing) Camera:Nikon Coolpix 5000 Location: home Date: May 30, 2003 Aperture: multi levels ISO: multi levels Shutter: multi levels Galleries:Advertisement Date Uploaded: May 30, 2003
*Critique Club*
Excellent focus and clarity. THIS is the amount of detail I love to see. I also see 'tripod' mentined in your comments, and this is a perfect example of WHY people should use one. Great clarity!
The angle and framing/cropping are ok, but maybe a little close on the right side.
Lighting is great. With the combination of great crispness, and good lighting, it really really brings out even the finest of the details here. I love how we can see how some of the little prongs are raised preparing to make some lovely music.
Definately portrays sound in my imagination. I think it fits the challenge perfectly.
Other than the crop on the right, I see nothing I'd like to have seen differently here.
~Heather~
It's kind of subtle, but I can see a few of those prongs in movement. Perhaps a perspective closer to the prongs and lower would help us see their movement even more.
Oh, neat. I had a very simple one of these as a kid, and I was always fascinated by how it worked, so to see a macro shot of the workings is very nostalgic for me. Which translates to "great choice of subject".