Gee, BeeGee, I'm beginning to feel as if I know you. Greetings again.
These models are shown engaging in a delightful conspiracy and that's a pleasure to see after all the 'downers' elsewhere. (But maybe that was a factor in the scoring.) I like the lighting; it seems to add to the 'conspiracy' factor. However, and I know you couldn't help this, I think there's some distraction and busy-ness in the straps and clothing in the bottom of the picture. If these models had been dressed in black, for example, it would have set off the center of attention, the interaction of the faces, perfectly.
All I can say, is keep up the good work, and to heck with the scoring.
This is a cute shot, but I'd like to see just a little bit more contrast. I'm also not too crazy about the downward angle of view, I think more of a straight on would have been more effective..