I like this a lot - the coloring & lighting are great, and I like the DOF w/the slight blur on the sign. The slightly menancing stare is intriguing - there's a mysterious story being told here, and it's very compelling. Well done.
What a pity the "girls" wasn't on the third as well else I'd have given this a 10 - other than that a great shot (in fact a great shot anyway but not strictly conforming to the rule of thirds) which has got my highest mark so far - well done
Simple and beautiful candid shot. Meets the challenge, model's hair seems a bit out of focus and Hue / Sat and maybe contrast bumped up a bit to bring out a bit more color might help this IMHO. Still I love it, and I hope it does well. 8
Nice use of the Rule. It seems your subject is a little off on the focus though. If you had a spot on focus with the model then I would have scored much higher. 6 anyway
She looks like a young Heidi Klum. I like her hair obscuring part of her face. I like the slightly blurred "girls" sign as well. Has a natural sense of it without being like a snapshot. Good composition.
intrusting tones.
well exposed nice use of low apiture to make the gal the subject the shot and not split the focus between the sign and her.
more than applies to the challenge-GL