Okay this is in no way meant to be rude but this shot really does nothing for me. I like the contrast of the sunset but the interaction of the people in the shot really just leaves me confused. 4
I wonder how this would look with the right hand side cropped in more towards the woman? I held my hand to the screen and liked it better without the distracting wall. Good concept.
The sky is nice, but this doesnt feel like much more than a snapshot. To really bring out impact you might try cropping out the blank space on the left side and darkening the foreground to sihlouette it against the sky.