Not having a city life like this, it is extremely interesting for me to view shots such as this. The lights, colorsw and the vantage point is spectacular.
This photo is really hard to comment for me.
I pulled it out yesterday, looked at it, thought about it, looked at it again, read the comments, watched tv, looked at it again, and nothing comes to mind.
I have no Idea what could be wrong with this photo. I like it, I generally like long exposures.
I also scrolled up and down, like sanx, and I guess she's right, but it wouldn't improve the photo by much.
I think I can only say that I like the skyline, the car going by while the other car is standing still, I like the perspective.
I think this critique will not help you by much, I'm sorry, I always try my best, but as I said before, I like the shot, and can't find nothing really to improve it.