Nice image and good idea, would have liked to have seen a bit sharper contrast on the dock area would have jumped this way up in the finish. Should still score fairly high Good luck!
Could use somethign to help the balance....perhaps some off-centering would be called into order here. The clouds are so washed out here, I would think about doing a horizontal instead of a vertical composition and use the rule of thirds. Just my two cents. :)
Man, I used to live in Kelowna many, many years ago. I heard my house burned down in the fire they had one or two years ago. Like the picture. I was trying to find a dock myself. It would be better if there were some more interest off the end. Either a more interesting cloud formation, a boat, or the mountains in color. For now...6