Very cool concept. Good use of perspective. I think maybe it could be a little stronger in this case without the slight blur, and maybe cropping a little bit closer to a centered composition (meaning the arch of the opening is further to the left, maybe crop off a little of the right so it is closer to center)
a photo of the hanging ads on the wall might have been interesting... what about the perspective of parallel lines with the ads rotated 45 degrees? you might want to try it out... this one doesnt seem quite interesting