Greetings from the Critique Club
This is a technically good image, great depth of field, good composition and nicely sharp. It meets the Challenge.
It is unfortunate that the shapes you photographed are simply not exciting enough, or interesting enough, for the voters, and that is probably why you received average marks.
Now, if you could have found a red or orange tiled roof and photographed it in the same way, you might well have increased you score quite a bit.
If what you photographed was the only possibility you had to photograph, you might creat interest by throwing a bright red rose or other bright flower on the roof and photographing the result. This added design would keep the viewer interested.
I had a good time looking at your portfolio. You have a good eye for photography and with a little practice I think you will go far in DPC. Good luck! |