Great use of shallow Depth of Field, but the idea seems too heavily reliant on the title for my taste. Could be improved by cropping the unnecessary black blur at the top of the shot too.
I wish I could see your whole title. I like the idea, but it lacks something that I can't quite pin-point. Maybe the ap is a little too narrow. Maybe a little more bend in the page would help, or an object on the page like a pair of glasses would have given the photo more substance.
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