I don't really get much sense of perspective although it's a beautiful ship. Perhaps consider making the subject more off centered next time, which can help in creating interest.
I don't think that perspective has much to do with the dramatic effect of this picture. I think that comes from the color and mood. The crop (wide and skinny) reminds me olf an old engraving. I really like this picture.
Needs more contrast, left side is washed out beyond repair (user higher shutter speed, or try a graduated ND filter), and the ship looks a little bit fuzzy. Try putting moving objects with more space in front of them to make them look like they're going somewhere.