Critique Club
Hi David. Not a bad score for your first entry. My first challenge entry finished with 4.blah blah. I like your perspective in this shot and I also think the composition has alot of interesting elements. Good use of sepia and I'm really not too bothered by the wires, though you might bring some wire cutters next time. ;-) You may have fiddled a bit more with the contrast as to draw out great detail and maybe fussed a bit more with the focus. I also realize your hands are somehat tied in a basic editing challenge. I'm seeing some noise in the shot and I'm not a huge fan of it. Might you consider using noise reduction software like NeatImage, it makes a big difference. I really like the angles and how they compel me to look for greater detail. Well done. Hope this is somehat helpful. Good luck in future challenges!
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