Should've been named boobjana. pretty subject but the attention is drawn to the lower half. 7
The comment regarding where the attention is drawn is fine, but your first comment is the type that would land many a man flat on the ground with a sore jaw, and probably sitting there saying "What did I do?". Shame on you.
I feel this photo could be great, but the angle is causing her chest to become the focal point along with what appears to be the indention of her bra instead of her beautiful eyes. I feel that if you had turned her body in more toward the camera it would have took away the too harsh outline of the white against the dark water and at the same time would have erased some of the lines that are running across her neck. This is a lovely model and a great background. The exposure was done very well.
Very pretty model, and nice lighting on her. I feel the background is more distracting, esp. so because of the border. A close crop on this same picture on her face would be a lot more interesting photographically.
pretty scene - your crop makes it look like you meant to emohasize her bust, it competes with her face. which is nicely captured, the slight breeze on her hair is great
there are so many distractions in this photo. I think the whole right side could go. The framing is too much. I think this would have been more effective if you got in closer to her eyes as they seem mysterious.
first thing I noticed was that her breasts look like they are setting on the frame of the pic. I think the cropping should be either higher or lower..and the lighting of the woman seems different than the background. It makes the background look like a poster.
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