*Critique Club*
This could be a very interesting take on home sweet home if not for a few distractions. First is the glare on the left handside near the top, then there is the issue of another glare or something like that just off center and to the right, also the right corner and the right edge of the photo where you can see the van are very distracting. Take your time when doing a reflection and get rid of as many distracting issues before taking the photo then crop out as much as you can and it will improve greating on mirrored images like this.
You are however well within the challenge with this definately says home. The focus is also very good. The concept is very good and has potential just take your time and take into consideration the distracting elements and this will work for you.
Anna |