Greetings from the Critique Club!! Nice portrait! The first thing I notice is the angle, it portrays such a feeling of fun, as does the expression on her face. Her eyes are beautiful, and maybe could have been accentuated more. With her blonde hair and fair skin, perhaps a darker color blouse or background might make this portrait a little more interesting and add a little more depth. The focus seems a bit off, her right eye seems sharper and brighter than the left. Very well composed, everything seems to work together to give the viewer a sense of fun. Overall, a great portrait of a pretty, happy girl! Good work and keep shooting!!
~~SiSi
Good composition. Natural expression. Had you use some fill light to tame down the shadows on her face (mostly the nose), you would have had a much better result.
This is nice but I would call this a candid rather than a portrait. The shadows on the mouth and nose is a bit distracting. She has a beautiful smile and eyes!
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