Very pretty face. The focus is a bit strong on the right side of the shot. It needs a bit more contrast to it and the lighting is hazy and has no pop. The composition is great and like I said she is very pretty.
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She looks a little fed up but generally a fine image. The background doesn't do much for the photo sort of flattens into the hair, needs a little more contrast..freckles are cool, I have lots so I'm biased :)