alot of burning going along her forehead, nose, shoulder and blouse. nice contrast in the wood background. needs a bit more softer light in her eyes. 5/10
This is a terrific candid portrait. The simple composition and unpretentious, casual feel makes it a very fine and real-life image. As a result, Janelle is a participant in the portrait, and not just a pretty prop. 8
The focus seems a bit too soft on the face, sharper on the background. A reflector would a have put some lights in her eyes, making the photo come more alive. i also feel that she is looking a bit too far to the side with her body too straight to make this seem natural instead of stiff and posed.
A great pose, model and background. Focus a little off on face especially around the eyes. If you could get a little more color in the blown out areas along her nose and forehead it would be a great photos.