picture seems to need a boost in saturation. and it might be interesting to frame the head with that ring thing that got cropped off. as in it might be interesting to include the whole ring instead of cutting it off
unfortunately, the glass around the baby is dilluting some of the colour and focus. a nice picture, good choice of composition around the baby's face, although would prefer to see the buttons? moved so it isn't in front of the baby's chin/cheek. 6/10
Wow! What a wonderful photo and a precious memory. This definitely tells a story. The fact that you were able to capture that gaze, that moment in time is beautiful. This photo speaks to me in so many ways. Thank you for sharing it with us. Techincally, the composition is wonderful, the light works nicely for you here and it has a nice pleasing color palette.
I'm guessing from the incubator and the heart monitor that things are going a bit rough for you right now. Good luck. I had three in the NICU myself - all came out ok, but the first year or two were trying. There is light at the end of the tunnel.