The line created from the left shoulder to the flower in her hair was a little distracting. The flower is so light that I mis-took it for an ear - only for a sec of course. I think changing the angle to remove the shoulder and maybe a brighter flower would make quite a difference. That being said I still like the picture and the upward angle of her glance.
Very sensual and earthy. I have come back to tis one ans raised my score. This is truly a portrait, and without being remotely traditional. Nicely done.
Beautiful model and I like the pose and the post processing. I think it would have been better without the flower. I think it competes for the attention. Great stuff. 8
Love the lighting you used, not too crazy about the overall composition although i like the angle of her face. Some fuzziness on the left cheek right out from her nose is a bit distracting.
Wonderful warm soft lighting compliments her features nicely. the catchlights are nice, just enough to make the eyes speak. :-) The coloring is very please as is your composition. A very pretty natural looking portrait.
she looks kinda drunk. I think if you would have had her lift her chin a little more it would have worked a little better. With that said you do have really nice light compisition and so on. I guess we all prefer different facial expressions
I find the jutting angle of the model's neck to be rather disconserting, and the eyes are a touch soft, but i love the tones and the way she blends into the backround
Beautiful and well done! This is one of those (as i like to call 'em) "high scorers" that make my entries look like complete crap ;) Great job! Not a single thing I would change!
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