I like where you are going with this shot. His position in the frame and the direction of his eyes draws you in. I think his hands distract from his eyes the key feature. Overall it is a nice shot
I am not too mad about the crop here, I would have liked to see more of the right side of his face and his hands. As a rule I never cut the hands or fingers off in a shot if I can help it.
very nice. In advanced editing you have to be on your toes, and in this case I think the white in his eyes should of been cleaned up a tad. Overall good, one-step away from being very good. GL.