I love the angle, but the focus is a little soft for my taste on this one. I love how the blue ribbon stands out, it contrast well with the straw hat! Great subject.
Beautiful, timeless portrait. The soft, ethereal feel is perfect for the subject, and the composition/crop gives it an intimacy that is also apposite. 9.
This has a lovely old fashion feel. I think it could have been improved with some reflected light bounced back into her face to enhance her beauty even more. I love the pose and the softness of the scene.
Beautiful pose. Its a bit soft but would probabily work better if you could see her eyes. Love the texture, it really adds to the portrait but not too much to distract. Good job!
The composition is nice. The lighting is a little flat and the focus is a bit soft. I think that f your model had kept this pose but given a litle look to the camera,it would have been a bit nicer of a result, IMHO.