A poor choice of subject since you would have gotten more control of the lighting out of the car, and standing at the ATM. Also the yellow glow should be fixed by setting the WB correctly for candescent lights.
Interesting take on the challenge. From experience, I can tell you that the vibration of a car engine causes blur 99% of the time. To take a decent shot, you have to turn the engine off or have the shutter speed at 1/2000+. I like the way you framed this.
Tells a story. The lighting is interesting because of the different colour temps from the different light sources. These make it a potentially powerful magazize article support pic. It would probably benefit from a change in saturation and/or contrast as the ATM looks a half-stop to a stop over exposed. Try it and see - 6