This is a very cool shot on several levels, I like the lines of the branches, I like the sun peeking through the branch, I like the overall feel with the black and white.
Now, what is wrong you ask? Well, things I'm sure you've already heard, hang on, let me check the comments. :::Scrolling down::::
Yep, the electrical wires, while they do add more lines to the shot and could work with it, the problem I have is the size of them compared to the branches. Too bad this was a basic challenge.
What I would like to see if the shot without the lines and see if that also affects the way I look at the halo and sun spots caused because with the extra lines they too are a bit distracting. But maybe with the lines removed..............
But again, the thorns, the branches, nice job, if you redo this shot (clone out the lines) I would love to see the results.