Undoubtedly, you meant well. This is creative and more thought out than 90% of these images. I think, though, maybe the lack of focus on the red object hurts a bit.
Is that a guitar pick? I gave you the benefit of the doubt, and tried to find some meaning in this photo. Maybe it's supposed to look like someone yelling, the red part being a tongue?
I'm trying, but I'm not finding anything interesting here. Did I miss something?
It was probably pretty dark, and I'm guessing you handheld the camera. Still, the softness of this detracts in a major way. I can't put it all down to camera shake, either, as the LRHC seems to be in focus. I really like the idea. Now quit pickin' your hole and get a tripod. ;-)