Greetings from the Critique Club!
This is a very interesting shot, it really makes me look twice at it and then even a third or fourth time. The use of grayscale is very well done. But the lack of contrast is probably what hurt it overall in the challenge. If I had time to vote I would have probably given this a 6 or 7 for creativity but not much higher because the contrast is just not quite there. I see lots of gray and black but no definitive white.
Also the upper left corner is a bit distracting, maybe if you cropped the top lower to take out the curved area, it takes away from the sharp edges of the rest of the shot. I really like the idea and the overall composition of the shot. Well done overall.
Deannda |