Nice idea, perhaps if there were other garments leading to the bed it would be more evocative Also, whatever that black thing is on the white cover is rather distracting...kinda looks like a penguin.... On the other hand, if you keep penguins in your bedroom, my hats off to you....
Oh come one, it's sexier with nothing but the shoes. Really nice bokeh. The only change I might like would be a different drape on the couch. Thats a pretty minor problem. Good Job.
i like the idea, but nothing is in focus here. i wish the shoe hadn't been cut off. the model adds interest, but there's just too much going on around her.
I like this one a lot. Great composition. The cover up against the wall is a bit distracting, but I find it leaves me looking at the overall shot more and more - never a bad thing. -- 7 --
Terrible composition by cropping the main subject. Think of it as being similar to cropping someones forehead out of a picture. If only for that, the DOF would have really pulled this shot up. But unfortunately that's so off putting.
Perhaps you were slightly too close to the shoe to get it entirely focused, but perhaps a further, longer lens wasn't feasible. Close the aperture up, longer exposure? The concept is good and I think the way you have it all laid out is perfect.
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