Concept was good, the composition could be better. The background is way too busy and taking away the focus on your subjects. White inside showing in one shoe and not the other is also distraction. Best advice I have is always pay attention to all details.
Fit Challenge Criteria: 2/2
Contrast/Color: 0/2
Composition: 0/2
Photo Quality: 0/2
My Subjective Affinity: 0/2
You got the shoe part right, but I think the rest of the photo is lacking. The first thing I notice, and I keep going back to it, is the rug underneath the shoes. Should be on some background that is not distracting. And the single light source does not provide adequate lighting to light everything up, and is not versatile enough to use emotional lighting.