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The leather curtain takes away from the subject here. Less is more, and just the shoes and freckle of the title would have been stronger on their own. The composition would be vastly improved by moving the shoes further left and rtemoving the superfluous empty space there. It's a classic 'snapshoit type' mistake to place the subject bang in the center. Considering the title I would have liked to see more effort to make the freckle the focus of the shot. Closing the aperture down a 1/2 a stop or so could have made the form of the feet stand out more and seem less flat. |
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