While i appriciate the effort you made to take abunch of sneakers outside and create a pyramid, the composition still lacks captivation. The sunlight is a little hardh on the left, bblowing out the white snakers, and the focuse seems to be right in front of the shoes on the grass, rather than on the pile of shoes themselves.
Does everyone have the same shoes or is it my imagination? I like the pyramid and the angle is good - the front view would have been a mess. Good composition. Just too many dang shoes.
I wish you could have chose a better spot of the bush for the background. The two white spots kind of take away from the actual pryamid. This is a nice picture though. Nice approach and good luck.
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