This pic was taken from the top of Table Mountain in South Africa. My 'better half' and I were checking out the view from the top and decided the shoes should be included in the pic..
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You have the focus on the mountain rather than the feet. Why does each person only have one leg? The composition in regards to what the image should have been about (the shoes) is very dull and muddled.
Nice idea but there are two things that bug me a little about the image.
1: The blue cast that is over the whole image isn't very flattering, I would have liked it more with a warmer WB.
2: The whole ocean part isn't flattering at all. First of all the horizon is both tilted and distorted and secondly the whole area is severly overexposed with no detail so it doesn't do justice to this scene.
4 from me because of the reasons I said but had you corrected this, for example by taking this photo at another focal length to minimise the distortion of the horizon and then also taking it for example at another time of day or from another angle so you could have lit the shoe part of the image and the horizon the same I would have liked it a whole lot more.
Short version is that I like the idea behind this shot but not how it's executed so keep experimenting!
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