Overall, the idea of this is clever, especially with the rhyming title. But I think it stops short after that. It would have served you better had the fruit and coins had more of a deliberate placement. As it is, they just look kind of thrown in a sporadic fashion, with no intent. The focus could use some work as well. When doing a close up type shot, it is imperative that it be crisp and sharp to detail the subjects used. The black background serves as a perfect backdrop for the vivid green of the limes and the shiny silver of the coins, but both of them lack a little in the oomph category as far as I'm concerned. If it had been me, I think I might have taken three limes and put them in an interesting pattern, or maybe even three in a row with the dimes sticking directly into them, or stacked on top of each other in front of one, making it more of a geometric shot. From seeing some of your other images, I know you have a creative eye and your imagination is always working. Keep up the work and I hope find my suggestions helpful!! All the best, Judy
Everything seems to be slightly out of focus, and the wrinkles in the background are a little distracting. Increasing the saturation and contrast would have helped this image.
This is a little boring for me. I wisht the colors were more intense, the black cloth were less apparent (perhaps fewer wrinkles?) and the lighting a little more interesting. Sorry.
Out of the box! I like it. Unfortunately I don't think it's very well executed. The focus seems a little soft and the wrinkled fabric takes a lot away from the composition.
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