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09/12/2005 01:26:41 PMPost actions
This shot is too dark and fades into the distracting background. Your focul point is lost some where on the left and there is a bit too much noise in the shot. For this shot to have worked you would need to lighten it up and and something a bit creative.Message edited by HBunch - removed crit club status.
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09/03/2005 11:32:58 AMPost actions
too dark & kind of boring setup to me
09/02/2005 09:53:30 AMPost actions
shoes blend into background too much
09/01/2005 06:29:11 PMPost actions
seems un inspired, whites are washed out a bit
08/31/2005 08:16:38 PMPost actions
Cool Idea but I am little distracted by the background in the photo.
08/31/2005 08:02:12 PMPost actions
There is alot of noise in this picture. The background seems a little spooky.
08/31/2005 12:51:25 PMPost actions
i like that your focus point is off to the side...changing the composition using focus rather than framing. nice.
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08/31/2005 12:13:36 PMPost actions
Hard to see the shoe. Maybe with just a tad more light, you could call it "Lurking". ;) Just a thought.
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08/31/2005 01:04:38 AMPost actions
too fuzzy
work on the curves
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